Final Story Link and Social Media Accounts

Link: https://medium.com/@mecrouch/theres-room-for-retirees-in-oxford-mississippi-9eed38c2e4a4

Social Media:

  1. https://www.facebook.com/visitoxfordms/
  2. https://twitter.com/OxfordEagle
  3. https://twitter.com/InvOxford
  4. https://www.facebook.com/OxfordMSChamber/
  5. https://www.facebook.com/olemissalumni/
  6. https://www.facebook.com/pg/olemisscomm/about/?ref=page_internal
  7. https://twitter.com/OxfordMagazine
  8. https://www.facebook.com/Oxford-Lafayette-County-Economic-Development-Foundation-181319535255130/
  9. https://twitter.com/HottyToddyNews
  10. Although they don’t have a Facebook or Twitter, Where to Retire Magazine would be a great audience to share my story with. They do a lot of similar stories, and here’s their email: contact@WhereToRetire.com

What Works Assignment 11

Headline: Saving Our World

I came across this story on Twitter as I was scrolling through my timeline. Someone had tagged the story and said “This is a beautiful piece of journalism” so I clicked on it.

This isn’t a traditional news story that has an inverted pyramid set up. It focuses more on pictures to draw you into the story. It forces you to click on pictures to read more on the story.

The “lead” here is a more of a delayed lead. It’s just two simple statements that pull the reader in. Then the writer makes the reader think about what greenhouse gases have been doing to the environment and informs the reader that it’s too late to reverse the damage one and wonder what will happen next, forcing the reader to wonder how their life will have to change to adapt to these environmental challenges.

I think each picture highlighted makes the reader wonder the story behind each picture and thus click on it to get the full story. I think this was necessary to make the article successful, otherwise people would’ve stopped reading if the picture wasn’t enticing.

Each picture also has a caption that tells the reader more about the story. Honestly, some of these were more interesting to me than others so I wouldn’t probably have read all of them if I didn’t have to for the what works assignment. The cover pictures, as well as the pictures within each article, were hands down the most effective multimedia elements in helping to tell the story. Without the pictures, I think the story would’ve fallen flat and wouldn’t have done as good of a job as portraying the effects that are happening on the environment. It’s easy to talk about

This story had a wide variety of sources. Each individual story has two-three sources, most of whom are officials who are pros on the topic being discussed. I think this is what makes the story so credible and “beautiful” as the person on Twitter put it. Since this is more of a feature story, they were able to use a bunch of time to get it right, which adds credibility and respect to the whole piece.

The only negative thing I can see in this, is that some of the stories are long, and I lost interest quickly. I think that’s partly because I have a poor attention span and sadly, this isn’t something that I know too much about so some of the terms went right over my head. For someone who was really passionate about this though, it would be great!

 

Women’s tennis prepares for SEC Tournament

“They’ve figured out a way to win,” head coach Mark Beyers said after the Ole Miss women’s tennis team defeated Mississippi State in their final conference game of the season last Friday.

Ole Miss, who defeated Mississippi State 4-1, hopes to continue this winning streak as they head into the post-season Southeastern Conference Tournament on Thursday in Knoxville, Tennessee.

This victory against their rival Bulldogs added to their season wins, contributing to their overall conference record of 9-4 and earning them the No. 5 seed in the tournament. This marks the first time since 2015 that they’ve gone into the tournament ranked in the top ten.

The Rebels’ seven-match winning streak has impressed coach Beyers.

“In this league, I don’t care who you are or what you are ranked, that’s an impressive feat,” Byers said court-side after the Mississippi State match, according to the Ole Miss Sports website. “Of those seven, five were on the road. It shows how hard our ladies have worked and battled against some hostile crowds and tough teams.”

UPDATE: Senior Natalie Suk can speak to this when she looks back to playing Mississippi State and the rowdy crowds the team encountered there.

“The Mississippi State crowd was loud at times, especially in the doubles and the end of the singles,” Suk said. “Every team in the SEC is tough and loud in a way, and Mississippi State was no different.”

The Rebels are determined to continue this battle against SEC teams this weekend, according to junior Allie Sanford.

“We can expect the competition to be very high on every single court, and I think we all have done extremely well in the close matches,” Samford said. “I think we also have a lot of confidence going into the SEC tournament. After our win against Georgia, and our No. 6 national ranking came out, I think we all really believe we belong at the top.”

The team has done a complete transformation from last year’s season when they ended with a conference record of 3-10 and lost to Kentucky in the second round of the SEC Tournament.

The Ole Miss Rebels will take on the winner of the No. 12 Tennessee/No. 13 Alabama match, which will take place on Thursday at 5 p.m. CDT. Ole Miss defeated both of these teams in regular season matches, winning 4-2 against Alabama and 4-0 against Tennessee.

Although the Rebels came out on top against these very teams in regular season play, it is always a challenge seeing them again, according Sanford and Suk.

“At this level you can never underestimate any team or player,” Sanford said. “I think we all understand that how we did against certain teams in season really means nothing once we show up on match day.”

UPDATE: The thought process really is that we have beaten a lot of the teams and to just try and do it again,” Suk said. “It’s important for us to build on our success.”

After the SEC tournament, the Rebels will have the chance to compete in the NCAA tournament, as well.

“I think we all are really determined to go all the way this season,” Sanford said. “This team has so much passion and fight, and we all believe in one another so much. We are just going to continue doing what we are doing, and represent the Ole Miss Rebels the best we can.”

UPDATE: As for Suk, a graduating senior, she hopes she has left her mark on the tennis program.

“I have had great 4 years at Ole Miss and graduating with us being ranked Top Ten in the nation is just a bonus,” Suk said. “I think the years I have been here, we have had success, especially this year, and that is great for the program.”

What Works Assignment 10

Headline: College Towns Can Be Attractive Later in Life

I literally googled “alumni retire in college town” and after reading a few, this lead caught my attention the most. As I scrolled through the article and to the bottom, I noticed a familiar town mentioned.

The kind of lead used here is a narrative lead, focusing in on William Riffer, a man who ended up retiring off the campus of William and Mary College in Williamsburg, Virginia. This sets up the story to talk about other people who have retired in college towns, whether they go their for the education aspect, the alumni connections or the stable economy.

The writer pulled me into the story by making me like the first person he talks about, William Riffer. And he makes me want to keep reading by introducing more likable characters, such as Sherry Burford and Bill O’Connell.

The nutgraph comes in the fourth paragraph when the writer explains the appeal for older people to live in college towns during retirement.

This story quoted five people throughout the story, but also highlighted the lives of several other and their return to a college town without quoting them. Most of them were the retired people, but the story also quoted an executive director of a university. This allowed to tell some of the downsides of older generations living in a college town.

Besides hyperlinks throughout the story and one picture of William Riffer, there wasn’t much multimedia included. I would’ve loved to see closer up pictures of the people mentioned and maybe even an interactive map highlighting where all these people ended up retiring.

As for my story, I think this does a great job of making readers connect with the people interviewed. I will zero in more on just Ole Miss and the alumni who have retired here and why they chose to come back. This article mentioned the Oxford Newcomers Club and Friends, which is great because I probably would’ve never known about that otherwise and can now easily reach out to them as a source for my own story.

How to Combat Seasonal Allergies

As the sun finally pokes its way through the dark, winter clouds and temperatures start to heat up again, the pollen count in Oxford, Mississippi is going up, as well.

Allergic rhinitis, more commonly known as hay fever, affects 6.1 million children and 20 million adults, according to the Asthma and Allergy Foundation of America.

Tree pollen levels reached medium-high range of 7.3 to 12 (out of 12) an average of 24 days of the past month, according to Pollen.com. However, these numbers have spiked in comparison to past years, according to Dr. Gailen D. Marshall, Jr., Director of the Division of Clinical Immunology and Allergy at the University of Mississippi Medical Center.

UPDATE: The freezing temperatures that Mississippi has experienced throughout the winter and even into April have pruned the trees to grow even more, according to Marshall. Combine that with the high amounts of rain has made the trees are exceptionally full of pollen this season.

“You’ve got a place for trees to grow like crazy this year, and the end result is the tree pollen season is much more severe throughout the state than it has been in recent years when we had much milder winters,” Marshall said.

Although seasonal allergies are sometimes referred to as hay fever, it’s important to note that a fever is usually a symptom of an actual sickness and not just allergies, according to Marshall.

“Hay fever is a misnomer because if you have a fever, it’s not because of allergies it’s because of a cold or other sickness,” Marshall said. “The other thing is that allergy symptoms tend to be limited to the head (nose, eyes, ears and back of their throat) whereas if you have a cold, you feel it throughout their body like in your joints and muscles.”

No matter what ailment you may be facing this spring, Marshall warns against overmedicating, especially when it comes to allergies because people often wait until they develop allergies and try to make up for that by taking many different kinds of medicine. Antihistamines, which are included in many allergy medications, are where the real problem lies.

“Antihistamines in the higher doses can be sedating and have an effect on blood pressure and even heart function.” Marshall said. “Exceeding that dose creates a huge problem.”

Some are turning to a natural remedy to combat these seasonal allergies: honey. Since the bees use the local flowers to make their honey, it is believed that this sticky substance contains traces of this pollen, which people can build up a tolerance against, according to Sam Mardis, beekeeper at Mardis Honey Farm in Tiplersville, Mississippi.

“There’s nothing concrete about the health benefits of honey, but I have plenty of stories about it helping people out,” Mardis said as he recounted the time he met a woman at a farmers market in Corinth, whose daughter was suffering from allergies.

“When she went to the doctor, he said to go buy some local honey,” Mardis said. “Now the girl is four and hasn’t gone back to the doctor since she started taking it.

After he bought his family farm back in 1994, Mardis said it was almost fate that he ended up working with bees.

“My brothers and I were walking around after the ice storm in March of ’94, and we saw this big tree that had been knocked over from the storm with bees swarming in and out of it,” Mardis said. “It got me wondering what that was all about, and then a few weeks later I saw a beginning bee-keeping course at Tractor Supply Company, and the rest was history, as they say.”

For more than 20 years, Mardis has been supplying his honey all across northern Mississippi, including places right in Oxford such as Chicory Market and the Mid-Town Farmers’ Market.

Sarah Doty, a sophomore student at the University of Mississippi originally from Brookhaven, Mississippi, has struggled with allergies since she was little and has found local honey provides some relief.

“Last week I had a runny nose and was coughing and sneezing 24/7, and I slept with a box of tissues beside me in bed,” Doty said. “I started taking honey and my allergies cleared up within 3 days, and now all I have is a little sniffle.”

UPDATE: Although this is an interesting idea that people have been practicing for a long time, according to Marshall, it may not be as beneficial for the majority of people.

“The major pollens that are problems for most people are those that are up in the air and wind, and the pollen that the bees use in their honey are not as much of a problem as most people,” Marshall said. “As long as they’re not diabetic where it would be hard on their blood sugar and they take it in moderation, I’m fine with it. It’s not going to harm them, and if it helps them then that’s great.”

If messing with sticky honey, isn’t up your alley, Dr. Marshall recommends the following as ways to combat seasonal allergy:

  • Limit your outdoor activity in the early mornings when the pollen levels are the highest for the day. If you do have to go outside, use a handkerchief to shield your nose and mouth from the pollen floating in the air.
  • Be proactive instead of reactive when it comes to taking allergy medicine.
  • Even though tree pollen is going down, be prepared for the grass pollen to start up in the next few weeks.

 

What Works Assignment 9

Patrick Reed holds off Jordan Spieth, Rickie Fowler to win Masters by one shot

I clicked on this headline because I figured I should get informed on what was happening in the Masters before I called my dad so I could at least pretend to know what I was talking about.

This story uses a delayed lead, which I think is effective because it gives some background about who Patrick Reed is before saying that he won the Masters. Plus, it works well with the headline since that gives away who won the golf tournament anyways.

The description used at the beginning of the story about Patrick Reed made me want to keep reading about why he was such a strong contender and fighter throughout the tournament.

The nutgraph of the story comes in the second paragraph when it spells out that Reed now gets to wear the green jacket after battling for the win.

This story uses three human sources, Reed and his two toughest competitors, Jordan Spieth and Rickie Fowler. The story also uses stats from the tournament throughout to explain the battle that Reed had to fight to come out on top.

This story had some great pictures of Reed, which were effective in helping to tell the story. There was also a video at the beginning, which recapped the tournament and the history of Reed in previous tournaments while including pictures. I wish there had been a video of him receiving the green jacket and/or shooting his last shot because I feel like that would’ve been cool to see. At the end of the story, there was a photo gallery with over 100 pictures in it. That was a little overkill for me, and I don’t know who has the time to look through all those unless you’re a die hard golf fan.

I think it would’ve been cool to see a timeline of past winners in an infographic or something like that. It would’ve been an interesting way to add value because it would reinforce this idea that Reed was going up against players who have been victorious in the past, such as Spieth who won back in 2015.

Final Story Pitch

For my final story I will explore the trend of Ole Miss alumni returning to Oxford upon retiring and the downsides and upsides of that. There’s some draw that Ole Miss and Oxford have to bring them back to the town they went to college in, and I want to uncover that.

What will I explore??

-What do they do to keep busy? What does the school have to offer them?

-What does the community have to offer them in terms of social activities?

I think a lot of what I uncover will come in the interviewing process, and then I can go from there and focus in on something more specific. For example, there are very few assisted living facilities and nursing homes in Oxford. And being in a college town, logistical issues may arise when it comes to accessing medical services targeted to the elderly.

As for media, I could take portrait photographs of the people I end up interviewing (my grandparents live in a cul de sac two minutes off campus so I was going to walk around there and see who would be willing to talk to me).

Send Silence Packing Event Kicks Off Mental Health Week at Ole Miss

The Grove is usually home to the best football tailgates, students studying on a sunny day and various community events throughout the year. On Monday, the Grove featured something a little different: more than 1,000 backpacks were placed among the ten acres of trees to signify the 1,100 college students who lose their lives to suicide each year.

Sponsored by Active Minds chaper at the University of Mississippi, the Send Silence Packing event kicked off Mental Health Week at the University of Mississippi while sparking a conversation about suicide and mental health, according to Kathryn Forbes, co-founder and current president of the organization on campus.

“Each backpack has the story of a person who has passed away because of suicide, and students walking through can read the story and see their pictures,” Forbes said. “It’s a really powerful walk-though display that we hope will get people talking here on campus.”

Junior Hallie Willenbrink stumbled across this exhibit on her way to class Monday morning and was particularly moved by the backpacks, especially the black backpack that told the story of a young man named Nick who ended his life at the age of 19 after suffering from depression.

“This is a way to measure all the lives lost, and life itself is immeasurable so it’s really powerful to see something like this in the middle of campus,” Willenbrink said.

This is just one stop that these backpacks will take while on tour, according to Active Minds Tour Coordinator Courtney Burke.

We’re having 15-20 stops this spring tour so that’s a lot of college campuses and students that we’re reaching,” Burke said. “Sometimes city halls and other town buildings will also host a display, so that’s good outreach as well.”

With 39 known incidents involving suicide attempts reported to the University Police Department at the University of Mississippi since 2013, according to the Clery Daily Crime Log, this conversation is more important than ever within the Ole Miss community.

These events throughout the week are also an opportunity for people to see the resources available to them if they do find themselves struggling, according to Josh Martin, a member of the fundraising and recruitment Active Minds board and psychology student at Ole Miss.

“I hope that people who need resources can find them here today and throughout the week,” Martin said. “We’re trying to change the way we talk about things because we all need to be more sensitive about the ways we talk about mental health.”

Tables set up in front of the Grove stage featured representatives from on campus and community resources, including the Counseling Center at Ole MIss, the Oxford Treatment Center and Communicare Oxford.  In addition to Send Silence Packing, Active Minds is holding many other events throughout the week to ensure students are aware of the resources on campus as well as the fact that they may not be the only ones struggling.

One of these events, which Martin is most excited for, will feature portraits and stories of people on the Ole Miss campus.

“We’ve taken portraits of people from all walks of life here on campus, and they’ve shared some amazing stories about their own struggles,” Martin said.  “Everyone has been so vulnerable and to see those stories paired with faces of people you know or have seen walking on campus is so moving.”

The Humans of Ole Miss Exhibit, inspired by the Humans of New York Instagram account, will open at 6 p.m. on Tuesday in Bondurant Hall with members of the Counseling Center addressing attendees at the beginning of the gallery opening.

“It’ll be another really powerful art display,” Forbes said. “We’ve gotten a huge variety of people and have tried to expand it to everybody on campus so hopefully everyone who comes through will be touched in a different way.”

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What Works Assignment 8

Headline: Students Lead Huge Rallies for Gun Control Across the U.S. 

I saw this story shared on my Facebook page. I clicked on it because I know I saw people from my own grade school participating in the March for Our Lives so I wanted to see what was  going on at a more national level.

This story uses a combination of a hard news lead and a narrative lead. It tell the who, what, when and where but doesn’t get to the why until later and doesn’t get too deep into exact details like names and things like that. I think that’s because the story was over the whole country, and it would’ve been difficult to zero in one one specific thing since it was a much grander scope.

After reading the lead, I wanted to know more about these students protesting and that pulled me in to the story to keep reading. I think the first quote used in the story did a great job of pulling me into the story on an emotional level.

 

This story had quotes from eight different sources, all of which showed a different aspect in the fight to get better gun laws in America. Many of these quotes were from the kids leading these protests, which I think it very important since they’re the voice of the whole thing. I think it’s so cool to see what these kids have been able to do, and hope they will continue to fight so passionately.

I think this story also did a great job showing the government side of things and dumbing it all down for the reader. Sometimes when talking about government policies and spending, it’s easy to confuse the reader with all of that jargon. This author was able to show that perspective of things without confusing the reader.

This story has a photo as well as a video to help tell the story. When talking about something so large in scope, I think it’s important to show footage from the actual march in Washington so that was effectively done here. You can really see the emotion on all of the people’s faces and hear the passion in the words that are spoken.

I think this story did a great job of showing all perspectives of the story. One way that value could’ve been added was add a timeline of all that has happened since the shooting  and what the school kids have done leading up to Washington. It would’ve been cool to see that visually.

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